Like we expected before, even within our most recent plot, Hamloul's Pizza Delivery, we still went and changed bits and pieces. But the main reason was how he was going to reach his destination, with whom, and why the story made more sense that way. All the while keeping in mind the humor and simplicity of it all....
So again, we've gone to a Camel delivering the Pizza to a great big Bull, who happens to live in a building of misfit animals and humans that all coexist, and having the irony of Hamloul's reflection (mirror inside an elevator) be his true antagonist by snatching up the pizza, eating it, and leading the Bull to beat up poor ol' Hamloul for it.
Here's our
Story Reel based on the above:
Then we got feedback...which would lead to another excellent bit of advice: audience is very important, and if you have an experienced audience than great! But when you're running short on time, fuel, and getting way too much feedback (good or bad). It's time to focus, who matters most? Is the humor relative? (always is) And is it absolutely crucial to take that feedback word for word, set back your whole work flow, and lose motivation?
I think those answers are pretty rhetorical, but nonetheless our group certainly went through every bit of it. It brought down a bit of the team morale, messed up our pipeline, and called for an emergency meeting. That being said, at this point we definitely know what needs to be done.